Feedback and Revisions
When my fellow groupmates and I sat in front of our class and presented our film for revisions we got a lot of important and helpful feedback and many ideas that we could put to use to further improve our film opening. we have decided to take the advice that our teacher and peers gave us and remake our title/credit part of our film. with this, we are going to fix our opening and reimagining what we are doing for the font in the credits to make it more eye-catching and appealing. also, with the opening of the movie, we will be experimenting with other things to make it stand out more. with this, we are also going to reimagine one scene where Jon love is sitting to fix the mis-en-scene and make it more believable and real. we are going to change the location in which he is sitting on the ground reading the letter, to a more wooded area fora more realistic effect.